NSG 660 Unit 1 practice question refinement example

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This NSG 660 Unit 1 practice question refinement example turns a complaint at the nurses' station, nobody uses these things, into an answerable question about incentive spirometry, through four drafts and a search record. Herzing NSG 660, Scholarly Practice, opens the BSN scholarship course with building a question, and this sample starts on a composite 30-bed general surgical floor. Draft 1 asks whether incentive spirometry works after surgery. Draft 2 adds the population. Draft 3 adds a comparison. Draft 4, the working question, specifies adults after open or laparoscopic abdominal surgery, a comparison with breathing exercises and early walking, and postoperative pulmonary complications. The search was run after Draft 4 so the question would not bend toward early results, and each PubMed step is recorded with counts. Fourteen records were read in full. A final section names the question's weakest part: how pulmonary complications are defined. About 900 words.

CourseNSG 660 Scholarly Practice
UnitUnit 1
Paper typePractice question refinement
LengthAbout 1,110 words, 7 pages
FormatAPA 7 student paper
SchoolHerzing University
ProgramBSN
UpdatedOctober 2026

Free sample paper for NSG 660 Unit 1

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From "Nobody Uses These Things" to an Answerable Question: Four Drafts and a Search Record on Incentive Spirometry After Abdominal Surgery

Student Name

Department of Nursing, Herzing University

NSG 660: Scholarly Practice

Instructor Name

January 13, 2026

What this page is doingThe title starts with the complaint in the words it was said and ends with the question. Keeping both in the title tells the reader that the narrowing between them is what the paper will show.
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From "Nobody Uses These Things" to an Answerable Question: Four Drafts and a Search Record on Incentive Spirometry After Abdominal Surgery

Where the Question Started

The question began as a complaint at the nurses' station on a composite 30-bed general surgical floor. A colleague, charting at the end of a day shift, said: "We hand every post-op patient one of these incentive spirometers, we chart 'IS encouraged' every four hours, and nobody uses these things. Half of them are still in the plastic bag at discharge. Do they even work?"

That remark is kept here as it was said, because it contains the whole practice problem in an unsorted form. It mixes three different questions: whether the device works, whether patients use it, and whether our charting means anything. It names no population beyond "every post-op patient," no comparison, and no outcome that anyone could measure. A database cannot answer it. The work of this unit was to narrow it, one visible step at a time, into something a search could answer, and to keep a record of what each narrowing ruled out.

What this page is doingThe first version is shown as it was spoken, not cleaned up. That gives the reader something to watch being narrowed, which is what the refinement criterion looks for.
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Draft 1

"Does incentive spirometry work after surgery?"

What was added: the device and the setting. What was ruled out: the adherence and charting questions, set aside for now because they depend on the first answer. If the device does not help even when used, the charting is a separate problem; if it does help, adherence becomes the main problem. What is still wrong: "work" has no outcome attached, and "surgery" includes cardiac, thoracic, bariatric, orthopedic, and abdominal operations, whose lung risks differ a great deal.

Draft 2

"In adults after abdominal surgery, does incentive spirometry prevent lung complications?"

What was added: the population narrowed to adults having abdominal operations, which are most of the patients on this floor, and an outcome, lung complications. What was ruled out: cardiac and thoracic surgery, where patients go to other units and where chest drains and sternotomy change the picture, and children, who are not on this floor. What is still wrong: there is no comparison, and "lung complications" could mean anything from a finding on an X-ray to a patient needing intubation.

Draft 3

"In adults after abdominal surgery, does incentive spirometry, compared with no incentive spirometry, reduce postoperative pulmonary complications?"

What was added: an explicit comparison. What it ruled out: comparisons with other devices such as positive pressure breathing, which this floor does not use. What is still wrong: "no incentive spirometry" does not describe what the patients on this floor would actually get instead. Nobody here would be left without breathing exercises, walking, and pain control. The real comparison is not device versus nothing; it is device plus the usual care versus the usual care alone. The outcome is also still a research outcome, not something a nurse could see on a shift.

What this page is doingEach draft carries a note on what it added and what it excluded. Draft 3 is kept even though it is wrong, because the reason it is wrong is what produces the final comparison.
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Draft 4, the Working Question

"In adults on a general surgical floor after open or laparoscopic abdominal surgery (P), does incentive spirometry added to deep breathing, directed coughing, and early walking (I), compared with deep breathing, directed coughing, and early walking without the device (C), change the rate of postoperative pneumonia or a new need for supplemental oxygen before discharge (O)?"

What was added: the comparison now matches the floor's real alternative, and the outcome includes something a nurse sees directly, a patient newly needing oxygen, next to pneumonia, which is diagnosed and recorded. What was ruled out: atelectasis on X-ray alone, since many patients have minor changes that never matter clinically, and lung function measures, which this floor does not record. A time frame was left out on purpose: "before discharge" is the only period the floor can observe, and adding 30-day outcomes would pull the question toward studies this floor cannot act on.

The Search

Searching was done after Draft 4, not before, so the question would not bend toward whatever an early search returned. PubMed was searched directly; Cochrane reviews were looked for separately; CINAHL was searched through the university library for nursing studies on adherence. The PubMed record is given in full because its counts can be repeated.

The limits were chosen one at a time. Publication type was limited to trials and reviews because the question asks whether a device changes an outcome, which needs a comparison. English was applied because the writer cannot read other languages well enough to appraise them, and this is stated as a limit, not a quality filter. Adults were kept because the floor has no children. No date limit was applied: the trials this field still cites in guidelines date from the 1990s and 2000s, and a ten-year limit would have removed most of the evidence a reader would expect to see.

StepPubMed search stringResults
1"incentive spirometry"516
2#1 AND postoperative300
3#1 AND (postoperative pulmonary complications OR atelectasis OR pneumonia)228
4#3 AND (randomized controlled trial[pt] OR systematic review[pt] OR meta-analysis[pt])78
5#4 AND english[la] AND adult[mh]58
6#1 AND (abdominal OR colectomy OR colorectal OR "abdominal surgery") AND (randomized controlled trial[pt] OR systematic review[pt] OR meta-analysis[pt])35

What the Search Returned

Screening titles and abstracts from steps 5 and 6 gave 14 records worth reading in full. Two stood out at once. A Cochrane review of incentive spirometry after upper abdominal surgery, covering 12 trials and 1,834 participants, found no evidence that the device prevents pulmonary complications, and noted that none of the trials reported whether patients actually used it (do Nascimento Junior et al., 2014). A guideline from the American Association for Respiratory Care advises against using the device alone and recommends it only alongside deep breathing, coughing, early mobilization, and good pain control (Restrepo et al., 2011). A randomized trial in a different surgical population, bariatric surgery, found no difference in low oxygen levels or pulmonary complications when the device was removed from routine care (Pantel et al., 2017). This last study falls outside the population in Draft 4, but it tested exactly the comparison the draft asks about, and it was kept for the comparison grid in a later unit with its population difference noted.

The Final Question, and Its Weakest Part

The final question is Draft 4 unchanged. The search did not change it, and that is recorded as a result: the question was set before the evidence was seen, and the evidence can now answer it or fail to.

The part the literature is least likely to answer is the comparison. Very few trials hold deep breathing, coughing, and walking constant and add or remove only the device, and none of the upper abdominal trials measured how often patients used it. The literature may therefore be able to say that the device, as usually given, adds little, without being able to say whether a device that patients actually used would help. That gap is also the colleague's original complaint about the unopened plastic bags, and it is the point where this question reconnects with the adherence problem set aside in Draft 1.

What this page is doingThe closing names the weakest part of the final question rather than hiding it. Linking that gap back to the original complaint shows the refinement kept hold of the problem it started with.
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References

do Nascimento Junior, P., Módolo, N. S., Andrade, S., Guimarães, M. M., Braz, L. G., & El Dib, R. (2014). Incentive spirometry for prevention of postoperative pulmonary complications in upper abdominal surgery. Cochrane Database of Systematic Reviews, (2), Article CD006058. https://doi.org/10.1002/14651858.CD006058.pub3

Pantel, H., Hwang, J., Brams, D., Schnelldorfer, T., & Nepomnayshy, D. (2017). Effect of incentive spirometry on postoperative hypoxemia and pulmonary complications after bariatric surgery: A randomized clinical trial. JAMA Surgery, 152(5), 422-428. https://doi.org/10.1001/jamasurg.2016.4981

Restrepo, R. D., Wettstein, R., Wittnebel, L., & Tracy, M. (2011). Incentive spirometry: 2011. Respiratory Care, 56(10), 1600-1604. https://doi.org/10.4187/respcare.01471

Reading the NSG 660 Unit 1 instructions

Unit 1 asks you to refine a practice question through drafts and document a search. Expect to show where the question came from, write several drafts with what each added, state the working question, record the search step by step with counts and name the question's weakest part. Students often ask how many drafts to show and when to search. Three or four drafts show refinement clearly. Search after the question is set, so results do not reshape it. Record databases, terms, limits and counts at each step. A complaint or puzzle from practice makes a good starting point. Naming the weakest element, such as a vague outcome, shows the question was tested rather than assumed.

How this NSG 660 Unit 1 example is built

The paper opens with the moment the question began. Four draft sections follow, each giving the draft and what it added or fixed. The working question is labeled with its PICO elements. The search section lists each step with terms and counts, from broad to narrow. The results section reports how many records were screened and read. The final section names the outcome definition as the weakest part and explains why it matters for later units. The drafts show the question improving step by step, which is more convincing than presenting a polished question alone, and the search record lets another reader repeat it.

Reading the NSG 660 Unit 1 rubric

Herzing grades this paper on where the question came from, the drafts, the working question, the search record and reflection on its weak points. The sequence of drafts, and what each one fixed, is where most of the grade sits. Origin points reward a puzzle that arose in practice rather than a textbook topic. Working question criteria look for population, intervention, comparison and outcome stated precisely enough to search. Search points go to databases, terms, limits and counts recorded at every step. Reflection earns credit when one specific weakness is named along with its consequence for later units. Searching after the question is fixed is often credited, since it shows discipline. Clear PICO labels help the reader. Melnyk and Fineout-Overholt's evidence-based practice text and the Cochrane review on incentive spirometry support the work.

NSG 660 Unit 1 help before you submit

Question refinement papers in Unit 1 often slip by presenting only the final question, which hides the refinement the unit asks to see. Another frequent problem is searching first and then shaping the question to the results. Students often leave out the comparison. Search steps are summarized without counts. Outcomes are vague, such as better breathing. The weakest part of the question is not named. The practice origin is missing. Limits such as language or date range are not recorded. Drafts differ in wording but not in substance. Finally, show what each draft fixed, because the strongest papers make the improvement from complaint to question easy to follow.

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NSG 660 Unit 1 questions, answered

Can the question come from something at my workplace?

The irritation behind it can, and that is usually where the good ones start. What should not travel into the file is the employer, the internal report, or the numbers that made the routine look poor. Describe the routine as one that recurs across floors of that kind, and the question survives with nothing borrowed.

Which framework should the question use?

Whichever your course names, and the elements matter more than the acronym. Many sections accept a question identifying a population, an intervention or exposure, a comparison and an observable outcome, with a time frame where it changes the answer. Forcing a comparison that does not exist in the practice problem usually weakens the question rather than completing it.

How many searches belong in the document?

Enough to show the question being tested against what is out there, which is normally more than one and rarely more than five. Include the search returning two thousand results and the one returning four, since the pair explains the narrowing better than any description of it. Record the date each search was run.

Where can I find a free NSG 660 Unit 1 sample paper?

The full NSG 660 Unit 1 question refinement paper is free on this page, four drafts and a PubMed search with counts. A refinement of your own practice question can be prepared on request.

How do I refine a clinical question for a nursing paper?

Start from a real puzzle, write drafts that add the population, comparison and a measurable outcome, then search only after the question is set. This sample takes a question about incentive spirometry through four drafts.